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Care

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She sat in her room all alone
With a heart as hard as stone
She started screaming but no one came
To all of them she was just their shame
No one ever listened to a word she said
Not even when she told them by morning she'd be dead
To all of them it was just a game
She was the girl they gave all the blame
All the blame for things gone wrong
It's been this way for to long
Now that girl just wants to be free
She just wants everyone to see
That she wasn't as bad as they made her seem

Now she sits here with a broken heart
As the cutting begins to start
Blood drips down from her arms and face
Shes finally getting free of this place
She smiles to herself and speaks out loud
As if she were standing in front of a crowd
"This is what you get for being mean to me
Now you can finally see all the pain you brought me
Maybe now as the blood colors my hair
Just maybe you might start to care."
Just a poem i wrote. I write poetry to get a message out to people, to me its not about the grammar. So everyone who wants to comment and tell me how bad my grammar is, save it. I know my grammar is bad and i apologize for that. If you don't like my poem don't comment telling me so, just read and move along please. I like criticism when only one person tells me, not 30 people repeating the same thing over and over. Im only 16 so give me a break please. other than that i hope you enjoy.
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sammy-girl12's avatar
I loved it, and your apsolutly right. Poetry is about getting feelings/message across. Not about grammer.